Fantasy of You

An excuse to get drunk in a costume. Fun fun fun.

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Sony will pull back. As much as everyone would like them to get what's coming there way, it won't happen. They're too powerful a company, to put is simply.

They have an opportunity to make a great film. The games plot and dialogue was written by famous script writers, afterall. Yet I doubt they will. They will take the ...

It can cause a lot of emotional difficultie, being held back a year, but I doubt this can be given as serious opposition to a chance at a better future.

What, after the First World War? When the victorious countries piled the blame on Germany, leading to the complete destruction of their economy and social system? Forgiveness and a willingness ...

Well, first of all, don't punctuate the end of every sentence. Think about where you put everything. Line breaks are line breaks for a reason. Either the break or the ...

Buy a dictionary, and buy a thesaurus.

When I critique, I usually don't like going over the whole story. Why? Because the errors are so common throughout the story that I do it the first couple of ...

Baby name books and site are an easy option, but they do work quite well, especially when the name comes with an explanation of what it means - it's a ...

I think it's a tricky question, since every situation will have a different place in the story that would be perfect for a character's death. As a general guideline, don't ...

Square brackets would be an appropriate name for them. I mean, if it's not the correct terminology, it's still pretty obvious what you're talking about. America just warp everything into ...

You're 13? You're pretty lucky to start writing so young. I wish I could have. A year makes a whole lot of difference, I think.

[b] Welcome to the YWS. You'll find a broad spectrum of writers here--ranging from the infantile to the matured, and everything in-between. Whatever suits your fancy, I'm sure we've got ...

Why are you posting a story you wrote three years ago? You can't take anything from it, and so it's pretty pointless to receive critiques on it. Post your new ...